Showing posts with label poetic. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetic. Show all posts

Thursday, September 20, 2007

My FIRST Poetic Moment...

Ever since I started my blog (to be honest, which was not that very long ago) I suddenly find a side of me that I have never know. I find it rather therapeutic, I get to say what I want and I get to express myself. It also makes me more conscious of my writing(spelling and grammar too!) and more recently I actually FELT poetic! So please forgive me if my first attempt at being poetic if it doesn't turn out so well. But well, cut some slack for your new fellow blogger's first attempt at being poetic. Hope you enjoy this below...

In Need of a Title

He greets me with a morning kiss,
So eager am I to see him,
Off we go to an adventure,
We seek for so long

He smiles at me,
Smile at me with his eyes,
So deep is his smile,
I almost get teary looking at him

As we arrive,
The sun was beaming at us,
Alas, the weather has changed to dark skiesh,
But it doesn't change how I feel

On the bed we lie,
Watching the rain fall,
My head on his shoulders,
His arms around me, my hands on his chest

As the rain trickle down the roof,
The gentle breeze blowing in our faces,
Our eyes shutting off,
Bout to go dreamland somewhere far away together

As I awoke still lying on his shoulders,
I can hear his gentle snore,
His face so sweet,
Not realizing I am staring, while he's asleep

Never wanting this moment to end,
I do not wake him up
and continue to watch my dear sleeping
Looking so peaceful

He winks at me,
So cheeky he is which gives tugs my heart,
Don't think he realizes it,
Oh heart, pls don't stop for a moment, I can't take it


If only he knew how he affects me sometimes,
This I don't tell him,
And how I want to pinch him sometimes,
But I don't mean bad, this he knows, I think...


As we set off for our journey home,
My heart is heavy,
Not wanting this to ever end,
Our escape from reality is ending

I miss him right the moment before I go to bed,
I see him in my dreams,
I think of him first thing when I wake up,
My dear, I miss you every moment I am not with you

So if you will hear me out,
Make some space for me,
Space in your heart I have yet to earn,
I promise I won't break it...

I was inspired to write this, so please do give me your comments and constructive criticism. And please give me some suggestions for a title for my first poetic attempt.